I Give My Love Poem by cody byrne

I Give My Love

Rating: 4.8


I GIVE MY LOVE

The pain of love
Is it the simple worry?
The hard words

Could it be anymore painful?
The fear of loss
The worry of pain

You don’t want to lose her
But shouldn’t happen like it has been
Will there be a click

Or maybe there is a fight
To win
Pain
Hurt
Suffering

Could it be that I don’t know what else to say
I love you isn’t enough
Or was it ever before?

I offer my love


I hate the repressed emotions
I want to be with her but how?
How do you tell a taken woman?
You’re made for each other?

How do you tell her?
The other man
Isn’t the right one?
Ho w do you tell?
That it’s true?

I offer my love


I want to be with her but can I?
Does she feel the same?
Will we ever be that way?

What will the parents say?
Are they comfortable?
Or do they think im after something?

No I wont let that happen
Love was made for protection
Its not a verb

I will stop all bad things at the door
I will halt the progress of evil

I can do it but
Only if its my place to do so

I cant wait anymore
I long to hold her
But who said life was a love story?

No love is our story
But will she take the role?

Can I let her have my heart?
Will I turst her if she says yes?
Or will I hide in fear of hurt

No I will risk the pain
I cant let her be hurt
I will guard her
I will protect her

Love isn’t a love story
Its her story
Its my story
But will we play the part of lovers?

I can
I will

Love isn’t the only thing
My heart isnt the only offering
My love is incomplete
My offering isn’t finished
Her protection
Is unfortified
I must protect her
I will love her

I will offer my heart
I will give my devotion
I will protect her
I will

Will she?

Heart
Devotion
Protection
Love

I love you
I devote to you
I protect you
I give my life
I give my heart

I give

My love




By:
CodyRbyrne

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Albert Wong 01 October 2008

This is good with natural speech, seems announcing to the world your love someone. It is enough to express with your words pour out from your heart.. Ver nice although without any rhymes at all. I like this true speaking.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2008

I liked ur style of rendering. But before you start poem u should plan the thoughts and give them a sequential flow..that makes the verse readable and beautiful. You are avery talented poet.

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