Almost Famous. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Almost Famous.

Rating: 4.7


so close but yet so far,
so bright but not yet a star,
almost famous,
but still nameless.
aldo i know some day
you will know what my name is.


01/11/2008
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 10 January 2009

Very touching. May your dream one day be realized. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sid John Gardner. 11 January 2009

The most important thing we have is our identity.One day Jose you WILL achieve fame if you need it bad enough.Great theme well thought out. Sid.

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C. Wega 12 January 2009

I know what your name is.. this is deep with much thought. the sun will shine soon.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 13 January 2009

everyone is a star even if we don't know it yet, good job i like it. =]

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sumaira .....ir 14 January 2009

Hopefull and lovely poem which shows your innocent thoughts...

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Ben Gieske 28 September 2009

Nicely done. I often wonder about those who are waiting in the wings, only one step away from stardom which for so many never comes. They are left waiting in the wings.

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Rishav Rastogi 18 August 2009

Yes Sir......definitely one day she is going to know that... 10

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

so short yet it is such a good poem! ! bravo! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)

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<font color =fusha>Amy 09 March 2009

short and simple great poem

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Sumpter Carter 18 February 2009

I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.

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