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Salim R Javed

[SRJ] (Leh Ladakh)

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I am a student.I am from ladakh. I love nature and belive that nature can teach us more than any teacher and its knowledge is lot more than we find in books and laboratory.........being a writer is my aim, poetry is my passion, i know i am a not perfect in it but i believe in trying......and i know i will become a writer one day... more »

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  • David Mclansky (6/5/2014 6:08:00 AM)

    Advice to the Poet Salim R Javid

    Don’t go advertising your beloved wares
    As if she was a fruit stand
    Many men with check her fruit
    To prove they are a man.

    Don’t go bragging about you love’s glories
    Speaking to the unlearned
    You’ll spark a fire in the curious
    And then who will be unburned

    Don’t go speaking of your loves curves
    As if she were Lexus
    The unlicensed with the uncivil nerve
    Will drive her off a lot in Texas.

    And don’t go speaking of her honeyed lips
    Those plums of bursting pride
    How many fingers will probe and dip
    As then try to get inside.

    The wise man hides his precious jewels
    From the voracious public eye
    All men are thieves with burglar tools
    Who covet beauties prize.

    I do not say to veil her face
    And make her wear a burka
    But don’t go bragging about your lover’s shape
    To a roomful of Viking berserkers

  • Richard Beevor (5/10/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    Hi Salim, I must say that soul voice is a beautiful poem, well designed and flowing, a lovely read and thank you for your good comments on my work, i appreciate it very much, respect and thanks to you

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