Your Name Poem by Bharati Nayak

Your Name

Rating: 4.9


In deep breath
I draw your name
Inside
To fill every corner
Of my cell
As you make
My days and night
My joy and ecstasy
You turn
My tears into laughter
My pains into flower
The madness and rush
The cacophony and chaos
That surround me
Melts into stillness
I become calm
Full, happy and content
Like a cool, serene night.

Saturday, August 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: god,life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abduhoo Salamath 26 August 2016

excellent..and well done really heart touching poem...thanks or sharing

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Abduhoo Salamath 27 August 2016

waiting for your new poem... hope will write soon.

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2016

Thank you so much for your inspiring words.

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2016

Thank you Abduhoo for your encouraging comment.

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Randhir Kaur 27 August 2016

Calm and compose...beautiful vivid n soft poem Mam...Really loved it...

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2020

As you make My days and night My joy and ecstasy You turn My tears into laughter My pains into flower.. your name is written in my heart....... lovely expressions.. thank u dear Bharati

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

God's name gives us such feelings that tears turn into laughter. Deep breath of life draws his name only. Serene light we feel with full joy. Very interestingly drafted nice devotional poem is shared here is excellent one.10

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Susan Williams 19 February 2017

So smooth and serene... a perfect coach for such a beautiful theme. You have that magic touch- -that ability to reach out and touch your readers' lives and souls. A spirituality that whispers softly of eternal things. Well done, my friend. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

such fresh and pure serene thoughts! ! thank you for sharing Poet! ! 10+++!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 30 October 2016

An excellent write..

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