Your Eyes, Me Blind Poem by the chinmay

Your Eyes, Me Blind

Rating: 3.5


The ocean like watery blue eyes,
Eyes which are full of languages,
Languages which i tried to read,
Deep and deep, meaningful and meaningful,
I read ur eyes and get mesmerise,
But what i read is impossible to describe
When my eyes walk inside your eyes,
I start to fly around in their skies,
These are ocean like wide and of endless size,
I pierce very deep into them when i look in ur eyes,
Angel like you i am unable to find,
Looking into your eyes made my mind blind.

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

A very nice poem, and I agree with Kelly below.. P: S: Your use of the colloquial 'ur' instead of 'your' and keeping the 'I' non-capitalised are also wonderful stylistic feature of this poem that complements the brilliant diction... Thanks for sharing Chinmay :)

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The chinmay 10 November 2015

hahaha: -) ...thnx Mr.

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Vishal Sharma 09 November 2015

lovely metaphors and wise words used in the poetry

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Very amazing expression wisely shared in this page really.

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

I too am mesmerized by eyes. Thank you, The

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The chinmay 09 November 2015

its my pleasure

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