Your Despondency Poem by Indira Renganathan

Your Despondency

Rating: 5.0

'To live is to die'
You say frustratedly

I will not retort
With my say
'Yes, die and live back'
Sarcastically

Prefer better to say
'To live is to love all..
The whole life'

Later
Choosig a river in spate
Drowning we both hand in hand'..
How would it be...?

Proven your say and my say
The right way to rightly die
How would it be...?

But considered
You will not like my say
Of drowning then
Will not even let me die alone
As you know the strength of love
Now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 19 September 2023

Love wins all the battles of life. Loved the way you put forward your thoughts.

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The strength of love that binds two cannot make a drift even in death. Adorably meaningful poem

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 23 September 2023

Life is all about Love. And Love alone. Nice poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 October 2023

Wonderfully powerful Indira TFS BRAVo! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2023

The right way to rightly die.....appreciated the core! Well penned dear madam. Top score

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 October 2023

A wonderful, meaningful and thought provoking poem so brilliantly crafted and expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 October 2023

We will never be in a state of despondency if we have love and are capable to give love always. Love is the foundation of life and we could enjoy the wonders of existence if we have love.

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M. Asim Nehal 27 September 2023

Love is the binding force to unite. Nicely written poem 5******

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