Your Call Poem by Sally Knox

Your Call

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I lay here in bed
and wait for your call
I lay here and die
but you won't call at all

The slip of the tongue
has turned you away
The truth in the lies
the edge starts to fray

You call less and less
and one day it's never
After the assurance
you'd love me forever

As my heart withers
and tears start to fall
I lay here in darkness
and wait for your call

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stug Jordan 12 April 2007

Good one. You lie there waiting for something you know will never come. Something we all do but never talk about. You've talked about it. Well done for writing with honesty and having the skill to communicate it. S x

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Perry Busch 27 March 2007

Love is the strongest force one will ever incounter. To be without love is to not live. You have shown the emptiness that is felt when love has been allowed to faded or withheld without reason

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Sally Knox

Sally Knox

Lewistown, MT
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