Once Again Poem by Sally Knox

Once Again

Rating: 4.5


Oh regression and obsession
Such depression. Weren't you guessing?

That I'd fall back
Into this track

And become crazy once again

All the pain caused by my huge flaws
Its hard to pause when sadness sinks its claws

Into my mind
And I always find

That I am crazy once again

This downward spiral's almost viral
Near suicidal and it's vital

Someone sees me
Someone saves me

From going crazy once again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stug Jordan 12 April 2007

Rhythm's really your thing. Hard to imagine this written by someone so young (not patronizing you, it's a good thing, for your readers anyway) . Hint of agression in your writing too, which can only be good. S x

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