You'Ve Been Moving Poem by Not Long Left

You'Ve Been Moving



You've been moving around for so long now,
around and around in my mind.
i search for you, but i am unable to find.
you've been moving around for so long now,
around and around in my heart,
i search for you, but you cower in the dark.
i've felt you breathing and sighing,
i've felt you screaming and crying.
you've been moving around for so long now,
around and around in my head,
i look for your escape route,
but i know that will come when i'm dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 13 September 2006

what an easy way to end a poem, like a suicide to escape from life. what about 'that will come when I'm set free from this body.'

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