You'Re The Loser Poem by Paul Pruel

You'Re The Loser

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When you’re dread and weary
Secluded and dispirited
You found me your victim
You’re akin to a vampire
Who just awoke from a long sleep
So eagerly desirous to get
My inmost precious substance

With your deadly fingers
Mighty molars and lips
You clutched me completely
And bitten me intensely
I begged you to stop hurting me
But you did not listen
You just ignored my wish
And laughed-out-loud

After draining out my vitality
You gauged me rubbish
And then throw me somewhere
In the toilet bowl and garbage can
Now I realize living with you
Is really helpless and unproductive
But I will tell you the truth
You’ll be the loser at the end

For every tar and nicotine
That you had drawn from me
Generate great pains, misery as well
And shorten your life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 05 August 2008

i got you a poem about cigarette? ...you got the point it ruins the life..just eat the lungs and form in cancer or to COPD...nice advocate poem...good job... Keep up your good work.. Best Regards, Ency Bearis

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Livi Topley 05 August 2008

wow. It is incredible, the second stanza really shows the harshness and intensisty of the poem. You really have done well!

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