You Promised Poem by ashley carmella

You Promised



you promised me forever
but little did I know,
forever only lasts 4 weeks
&then its time to go.

you promised me a year
but silly of me to think
a year was shortened when I was sleeping
& its time to wake up and blink.

you promised me a month
but surely that didnt last
I never knew that a whole month
would come and go so fast.

you promised me a week
a measly 7 days
but I stayed around hoping
that you would change your ways.

you promised me a day
so with the 24 hours I kept,
I spent it wondering what happened to forever
& after that I wept.

if you promised me a minute
I know what i'd do with the time,
I'd use up all 60 seconds
glad that you were mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 07 July 2008

always be thankful and glad with whatcha got cuz you never know when it'll go away. wonderful job.

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