I told you I was in love,
But you laughed and
Laughed and laughed.
.
I gave you my love,
But you did not give me yours,
Instead, you kept mine, and
Gave yours to another.
.
You laughed at my song,
You laughed at my walk,
Then I danced my magic dance
to the rhythm of the talking
drums pleading.
.
But you shut your eyes, and laughed
And laughed and laughed.
A lot of laugh- outcome is sorrow. Touching composition,10+
You laughed at my song, You laughed at my walk, Then I danced my magic dance to the rhythm of the talking drums pleading. i danced my magic dance............ love this line in your poem. you are true in portraying the vows of a love relationship, a one way......... thank you. tony
A gentle and soft poem, Efe.....Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
tender poem sadness too 10