You Know Your Fault Poem by Ernestine Northover
You Know Your Fault
Do some detox,
Clear your head,
Unlock all locks,
Feel free instead.
Sit a spell,
Relax a while,
You'll feel swell
If you'd only smile,
Or try to yawn.
It won't crack your face,
Desire to be reborn,
Find some space.
Put your feet up,
Take a break,
Lift a teacup,
Try some cake,
Have some time off,
Lounge around,
With some wine to quaff,
You'll sleep safe and sound.
Call a halt,
Calm the mind
You know your fault,
You just can't unwind!
© Ernestine Northover
Agree with Esther. Type A, but with a healthy dose of Hypertension, as well? Or unhealthy. Penned in short, precise words, as the words' meaning is. Thank God I'm not a Type A. Great work to be admired! ! ! xxElysabeth
I love this one too Ernestine, you are amazing---I look forward to another evening of Ernestine----Melvina
This poem makes me glad not to be a 'Type A' personality; willing to bet you aren't either, Ernestine! Great message for those who are and for those who need a good break from the hurly-burly of life. : ] Esther
Dear Ernestine Yes we rush around far too much. Have you ever heard the piece of choral music called deep peace by bill douglas I feel that you would really love it.
This is great Ernestine I like the way it starts out as if the subject has mental health problems and ends as just a subject who is uptight. Warm and humourous the pacing is spot on as if the narrator is at their last tether.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Ernestine. I like this. '...unlock all locks! ' Suggestion: ' You Know Your Fault(s) perhaps? Just a thought. LSP