I was watching the sun pass threw the house, and listening to
the laughter echo about.
I was watching the critters outside at play...Try to figure out
what they had to say...Look deep into their eyes, try to see inside.
I was watching the wind talk with the trees, watching the way
the branches bent in the breeze.
I was watching time come to a slow, coming back to all I know.
I felt the peace settle in my heart, as I became apart...
All that surrounds me, all that I see, becoming one with me.
Then a song came along, and took it away...
Brought me back from Yesterday!
What a wonderful piece of poetry here, watching the wind talk with the trees, branches bending with poetic sign language that only poets read....I found this poem to be a true delight! !
Thank You! ! ! Bill, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Beautifully Wonderful! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles
Unwritten Soul has said it well, Rebecca. You do have your own signature, your own flavor, and it is so uniquely yours. You draw out of a deep well and you give us to drink deep of it- - your world, your days on earth, your heart and your soul are nourishing that well and it is so good and savory to drink from it. 10 ++++++++++ again
Thank You Susan, For Making Me Smile! MANY! ! ! ! ! In Return! ! !
Reading you is like reading your personal life of beautiful time...you highlighted it in simplest way, yet it is indeed a precious thing that we can cheer together with you. You always have a great nostalgic pen..which is making you having your own signature remark as a writer. Keep writing more beautiful work Rebecca
My Goodness! ! ! Thank You! ! ! Look Foreword to reading more of Your work too! ! ! As I said Before You're an Incredible and Amazing Poet! ! ! ! Love Your Writing! ! !
Watching the way we become careful to walk and we learn many things. Bent branches blow breeze. Coming back to surrounding we know many more things. Learning from back to yesterday is good. Wisely penned! 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem. The play of nature penned beautifully. Liked it.