Words: I Love You Poem by gina prettybrowneyes

Words: I Love You

Rating: 3.3


weighted words, tossed like beach balls
from heart to broken heart
the true meaning is lost, but
we still speak its message

weighted words, eaten like french fries
too much speaking, not enough thinking
fading away from overuse
the true meaning is lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Jones 30 September 2006

magic... thats it... Love... Kyle...

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Patricia Gale 11 September 2006

Loved it! Yes some use the word Love like a beach ball... hitting it from one player to the next...

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Sourav Rc 24 July 2006

Very interesting... May be it's true... Nice poem.

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