A Memoir To Childhood Poem by gina prettybrowneyes

A Memoir To Childhood

Rating: 4.8


light. strikes
a silver hand
outstreached
waving goodbye
to the sounds of life
to butterflies
and ice cream
frozen
in the moment
light.
creeps down
the gleeming figure
tracing childhood's
outline
every band-aid covered
elbow
kissing memories
goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kadelynn Roberson 17 August 2007

nice poem you can reminise and connect to your past and your felling that really helps draw the readers in GREAT work!

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Kyle Jones 28 September 2006

GINA! ! ! Just so you know, I've read all of your poems and I LIKE all of them. (but love quite a few) This one is so sensetive and moving, I printed it out and used it as my graphic design class folder cover, You are deffinetly one of the greatest poets here! I'm gonna put you under 'my friends' (once I figure out how) I'll review all your other masterpices soon! Love, Kyle

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Duncan Wyllie 14 July 2006

This is sensitively done and oh, so tender, thankyou Love duncan X

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Ivy Christou 11 September 2005

I liked this poem. it was sweet and tender. Great write! HBH

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