Words Poem by chloe young

Words

Rating: 5.0


i feel choked by my words,
they are swelling inside my skull
and they are lathering me in sentiment and folly.

my pen has become my enemy
and a regret that i cannot conquer.
they join inside of me

and plait themselves together in sentences
weaving into my brain and stifling their
surge to my fingers and suffocate my wit.

if i could i would wrap my mouth
around my head and heave the knitted words
from my brain and lay them
onto my white blank page, but,

my words, they imprison me, they grip
me behind steel bars of language
and i anguish, i anguish.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prakash Mehra 08 November 2009

A real gem. I loved it.

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Siddharth Singh 15 August 2009

Best way to come out of the prison of words is to wield your pen, which is something you have done exellently. A 10.

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Dylan KD. 11 August 2009

i thought that was written pretty well actually, good job.

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Graham Russell 10 August 2009

that was beautiful..thank you for sharing it.

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shutes....... you are good.. i like.. nice.. nice... you shud read my words..... i gotz two.

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