Wo(E) Man Poem by SWAPNA FERNANDEZ

Wo(E) Man

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In the darkness of life,
She sobbed so hard,
Thinking about her lost life,
Thinking about her kids....

Remembered those days....
When her partner cuddled her like a kid...
When he hold her close to ensure comfort...
When he helped to take care of their kids...

Everything changed one day...
He shouted for no reason...
Refused to spend time with her...
Neglected the innocent smile of kids...
And at last left them alone...

She wiped her tears,
Realising that she need to be strong,
For the sake of the kids...
To be happy infront of him,
Who started enjoying his honeymoon trip...

Wo(E) Man
Sunday, January 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,sorrow,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Swapna F. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 June 2016

Swapna, History repeats itself, repeatedly, for ages. Solution? Woman should be encouraged to take education seriously and to earn their living; not just their, may be she may have to support her children too, single-handedly. They Should not be dependent on man. I am not justifying the wretches-called man- who is always in search of greener pastures, younger women. It is natural for women to be attracted to men; and nobody has read the mind of others and nobody reads the future. But future safe is what women should think first in a relationship. Let us hope things improve and men also start respecting their mother, so that the respect for mother gets translated to respect for all mothers and all women. Good Write; keep it up.

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Kishore Kumar Das 08 April 2016

u have depicted the typical panorama in a breath-taking style...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 January 2016

Very touching sentiments poured out through this beautiful flow of verse.

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Swapna Fernandez 24 January 2016

thanks for reading sir....

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