Without You Poem by Demarcus Walker

Without You



what is mickie without minnie
what is sponge bob without patrick
what is pooh without piglet...

What am i with out you
i'm nothing with out you boo
so let me tell you

you is the light in my darkness
you is the cloud in my sky
you is my everything
but i'm nothing with out you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is so good and u have a great heart and u is very caring i see keep the good work up...

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

what a beautiful write to the one you love, how beautifully romantic.

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Carol Gall 09 June 2009

good flow of words like this one

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The Dreamer 09 June 2009

Good mix of words and rythm - well done

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~*emo*princess *~ 05 June 2009

i like it! it has a nice rythm thing goin on. keep writtin

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