Burning Heart Poem by Demarcus Walker

Burning Heart

Rating: 5.0


this feelin
is like a pain
like my heart had burst in to flames

my heart is burning with love
for this girl from the heavens above
but i dont know did i fell in love

that girl made heat
when she walk past me
with nice & slow feet

listen to me
my heart still got the heat

but my love is from my burninig heart
that where it had all started

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassie Heinz 26 June 2009

beautiful poem..... from the heart :) could u read my poems and comment, there arent many yet...: /

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 June 2009

The burning desire that sparks the burning heart to a standstill.You're in the ring of fire now Demarcus.

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ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW GOOD WRITING

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

raw emotions fill the page from a heart burning for love. absolutely wonderful, hun.

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Jason Sherrill 09 June 2009

Very good, sounds straight from the heart, need to work on rhyming though, using the same word over and over gets repiticious and leaves the average reader feeling bored, but overall, very good

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