With Your Eyes Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury
With Your Eyes
I am enjoying everything! With your eyes!
the incessant rain on a valley, the blessing of a sun-kissed day,
the snow-capped mountain-peaks,
the glorious sandy beach, the glow
of a gorgeous morning - enjoying all!
I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills,
the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans -
everything, with your eyes!
I am not sad, I am not sad at all,
this world is beautiful!
you will bring all to me,
saved In your heart,
like a pearl encased in a shell
of memory, and opens up
only for a special one, when time comes.
I am enjoying, with your eyes,
And no one else's.
I am enjoying, with your eyes/And no one else's.......Lovely poetic expression! I strongly believe you can make a significant contribution to the field of literature through your beautiful poetry writing!
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A fascinating poem. I wish you merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.
I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills, the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans - everything, with your eyes! I admire the lofy poetic expression. Just beautiful. Top score!
2) Very fascinating is the poem BUT also how the poetess writes this poem, she sees through your eyes.5 Stars full and to my Favourites!
While the poetess is telling that she is observing the view outside with your eyes, I get the feeling that indeed that IS so. When rereading again, this poem gets lovelier and finally loveliest! Beautifully described imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/8/2024 5:03:17 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I am not sad, I am not sad at all, This world is beautiful! You will bring all to me, Saved In your heart, great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you so much! These lines are my favourite too! Really appreciate your comments! And what a rating!