With Greed Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Greed

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I established lead
But failed to read
What was actual need?
To cater friends and feed

I got simple answer
The key lies with fewer
It is sweet coated offer
With clear aim to differ

I am number one greedy person
I make relation for selfish reasons
Greed is rampant in mind
So I act very kind

Greed shall pay dividend
And bring happy end
But I am mistaken
The peace, in turn, shall be mistaken

I shall die as unhappy man
Considered not fit to be human
It shall or should remain endeavor
I shall die hungry but not with greed or dishonor

Friday, November 7, 2014
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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

great poem sir, .................a greedy person is always unhappy...........he makes relations for his own profit........thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2014

I like the pace and rhythm of this write wrapped about a compelling story. 22 minutes ago by Just Arun | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2014

Wonderful Muhammad Khalid Khan12 hours ago A very well written poem Sir Comment +1 nice Sai Krishna12 hours ago cute Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2014

You will never have it all.. Greg Noland13 hours ago In fact it is over rated...

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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