Winter's Farewell. Poem by Fay Slimm

Winter's Farewell.

Rating: 5.0


Iron-gray and warmth repelling
Cloud clad skies in winter drab.
Lowering and laughter quenching.
Cold errodes in icy grab.


Stone-still and mind consuming.
Clammy air bites into thought.
Blanketing and effort dampening.
Movement to cessation brought.


Grave-quiet and breath dispelling.
Stifled breeze bestirs no leaf.
Shivering and strangely yawning,
Nature hangs in heavy grief.


Love-sick for sun's restoring.
Waits, entranced by chilled suspense.
Sensually, in silent pining.
Anticipating recompense.


Rose-pink with blush of longing
Imagines 'Spring' on conquest bent.
Garlanding and colour strewing
Nuptual bed's abandonment.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 18 December 2008

Beautifully constructed and strongly focused. The visual and sonic images perfectly support the poem's inevitable drive toward spring's renewal.

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Bob Gibson 09 August 2008

What a brilliant poem! a 10 definatly and a keeper!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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