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Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 618 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Winter


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When silent chill breeze blowing,
and flowing from the Himalaya-
odor of jasmine flows in air
When my Lora wearing white cardigan,
the priceless sunshine breaks the fog

Kite, kite -
When my kite flying over the sky
Until my eyes feeling fog
A gay glisten mood, dancing -

When blanket hangs at lanai
Grand ma weaving woolen sweater for me
When my ma making ROSER PITHA at evening
And I have been waiting until next morning

Kite, kite -
When my kite flying over the sky
Until my eyes feeling fog
A gay glisten mood, dancing -

Drops of dews are pinging in the silence
When blanket hots my body and anger
and sleep covets my eyes feather
A black and white dream stirs at next to

Kite, kite -
When my kite flying over the sky
Until my eyes feeling fog
A gay glisten mood, dancing -

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@ Musfiq us shaleheen

Submitted: Friday, January 10, 2014
Edited: Sunday, December 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: winter


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Winter- Mainly this subcontinent

Recipe of ROSER PITHA: - (one kind of cake)

boil some regular milk with a pinch of salt, add flour (all purpose) or rice flour……after becoming cold make it tender with a bit of GHEE by hand……take small amount of dough, rolle by finger and make a spiral shape as like as the pics……..for syrup, take 1 cup sugar with 3 cup water and wait for boil…..after 10 min boiling turn the heat off…….fry those spiral dough in deep oil with medium heat until it become brown…….add the brown well done fried spiral into the warm syrup for a long…


- Shaleheen,10th January,2013

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  • Rookie - 273 Points Sekharan Pookkat (1/23/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    Silent breeze of cold winter
    Breaks the silence of thought
    During night and day
    With a humming sound of kite-. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,585 Points Sallam Yassin (1/12/2014 4:45:00 AM)

    very sweet and warm song
    making everybody in winter need to be home
    Oh I want to be home/ thanks brother to share (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simon Samuel (1/11/2014 1:59:00 PM)

    this winter plays over mostly the subcontinent specially Bangladesh and India. picture is very clear.
    the way you described is so beautiful. Roser Pithat, an interesting recipe which is described.
    you touched the best element and moment of winter with great imagery.
    keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

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