Wind Of Change Poem by Smoky Hoss

Wind Of Change

Rating: 5.0


Life changes quick as a breeze-
Blowing backward through painted porcelain trees
The fake foilage unaware
Of such mighty and mysterious air
Topples and breaks
Into glass mirrored lakes,
Broken pieces reflect
What so few seldom suspect:
All is not secure and safe
Here, in this phony land of sugar plumbs and sweet cakes.

It's all bound to come apart
With the new wind that's blowing,
The fake forest we've been sold gives way
To the true trees of home, forever growing.
The time is at hand,
For the children to retake their promised land.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 12 January 2012

I too like your new format. Yeah. Have you read mine - We the Unencumbered -? Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 05 January 2012

, I like it Smoky, and I like your new scheme. It comes natural to you. Don't abandon your other style completely, you are good at both, you are growing as a poet very rapidly.

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