Wildfire Poem by John Beaton

Wildfire

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It starts with lightning, tinder, and a gust.
Smoke-jumper teams, at this stage, may contain it—
clad in Nomex, ‘chuting down to dust
they rip along the fireline like a bayonet,
swinging pulaskis, cleaving to clearings and creeks,
drip-torching back-fires, containing each hot spot
with counter-tides of flame. They know physiques
honed to sprint with gear may still be caught
by racing fronts and panic, so they pack
a thin aluminum drape, a fire-shelter.
A flare-up—now they cannot reach the black
by racing through the flame-wall, helter-skelter,
so they deploy before the terra torch
and bake like foiled potatoes in its scorch.

The fire expands. Its roaring conflagration
finds ladder fuels and candles standing trees.
The incident commander starts to station
resources round the burn's peripheries—
machinery and hotshot crews assemble
in camps and helibases. Like mirages,
infernos rise to ridgelines, flare, and tremble.
As faller teams and swampers check barrages
of lowland flame, a bucket-swinging Bell
lathers long control-lines with retardant.
The Super Huey heli-crews rappel;
Sikorsky sky-cranes suck and buzz like ardent
mosquitoes, but combustion's alchemies
still plate the skies with gold. A rising breeze…

The crowning flames become a firestorm
as fires' heads combine. Convection columns
shoot limbs and embers upwards where they form
flak for tanker-crews. Smoke overwhelms
visibility. They drop a Mars
and lift great lumps of lake, on every mission
seven thousand gallons salving scars
from summer's branding-iron. Sudden fission
caused by sap expanding inside trunks
sends frissons of crackling sparks across the blaze
as fire-cracker trees explode. The thunks
of falling tops spook ground-crews. Flames find ways
to lope the overstorey under cover
of smoke while dozers doze and choppers hover.

Although we fight it, such spontaneous heat
kindles inner duff.Like Icarus
we're drawn to flame as if it could complete
combustion of some smoldering in us,
a splendor in the trees. With rolls and dips,
like waxwings, flying wax wings to the sun,
we soar... And then, as if a flash eclipse
confronts us with the dark side of the moon,
the aftermath appears: black devastation,
burnt poles which yesterday were foliaged.
Cracked pods already seed reforestation
and years will heal what fire so quickly aged
but now, devoid of even twigs and slash,
this moonscape marks where sunlight fell as ash.

Wildfire
Thursday, September 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,forest,passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One summer, my wife and I were driving in the vicinity of Californian wildfires. Wemade it through a temporary road opening with active fires on both sides of the road. We live near a lake where the last active Mars water-bomber is stationed. These ideas fused into this poem.

The stanzas each have fourteen lines rhymed ababcdcdefefgg and the meter is iambic pentameter (e.g. it STARTS with LIGHTning, TINder, AND a GUST.)

This poem has been previously published in Able Muse and Maui Muses.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 24 September 2018

P.S. Did you read this poem for the recording above?

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John Beaton 24 September 2018

Hi, Susan. Yes. I write for recitation as much as for reading so I have most of my poems memorized, including this one.

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Susan Williams 23 September 2018

My gosh! ! ! ! My heart is pounding cuz you are making me feel like I am there with those firefighters and I am not brave and I don't want to be brave. Excellent writing! Too excellent! ! My heart is still pounding from all the realistic details surrounding me and I do not want to be a baked potato ever. A million trembling 10's for this superb piece of writing!

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John Beaton 24 September 2018

Thanks, Susan. It's a delight to find that someone has got right into one of your poems to this extent. Thanks for taking the time to comment in such detail and so graciously.

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Kostas Lagos 20 September 2018

An example of what we call a well written poem! 10!

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John Beaton 20 September 2018

Many thanks for the gracious comment, Kostas.

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