Why Do I Even Try Poem by Brandon Bretsnyder

Why Do I Even Try



Why do I even try
When all I want to do is cry
With each step that I take
I continually feel as if I’m going to break
I don’t want to live here anymore
This world has taken everything that I adore
Why does this always happen to me
Why can’t anybody see
The pain I feel is unbearable
Pain most people couldn’t even handle
I’m sick of everybody trying to pull me down
I’m sick of everybody trying to make me frown
Why do I even try
When all I want to do is die

Monday, May 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Galvin 18 May 2015

Brandon, I've read all 3 of your poems; you articulate your pain very well; poetry can be your outlet, your release... keep writing.

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