Depression Poem by Brandon Bretsnyder

Depression

Rating: 4.5


Depression
My most noticeable expression
I don’t know what it’s caused by
Maybe it’s because people lie
Could it be that nobody cares
Or is it from all of these cuts and tears
All of this depression makes me feel so blue
But there’s one person I can look up to
This person treats me with respect
When all I do is neglect
This person shows me love
When all I do is push and shove
This person is my Father
But I just feel like a bother
He deserves more
Than just a son whose attitude is poor
You deserved to be listened too
Everything that I am saying is true
I love you Dad
I know that in the past I’ve been bad
But I want to make it up to you
Anyway that you choose
You are the Yang to my Yin
The Coke to my Gin
Dad, I love you
Do you feel the same way too?

Wednesday, April 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,father,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and written in reconciliatory tone, expressing heartfelt apology for previous bad attitudes displayed with sincere heart to make amends and compensate for them. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Brandon Bretsnyder 23 April 2015

Thank you so much! You have made my day.

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2015

Lovely poem, Brandon. Thanks for sharing

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