Whom Should I Blame! ! Poem by Saeed Jan

Whom Should I Blame! !

Rating: 4.8


All my craving, all my love,
Is like a cloudy sky,
Failing to bring rain,
I know my love U want me too,
But God hath so desired!
We are not destined to be one,
Though a fault a little is ours,
We must accept, we were sluggish,
That kept a sea of fire in bosom,
Without giving it a vent,
Whom shall I blame, God or ourselves?
Was that our fate?
were we destined to part?
Whom shall I ask this,
who will give justice?
Oh Lord! Is it justice, is it justice?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All these questions left unanswered... I'm still looking for, but unable to find! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 08 April 2013

Though a fault a little is ours, We must accept, we were sluggish, That kept a sea of fire in bosom, Without giving it a vent, Whom shall I blame, God or ourselves? Was that our fate... love to read these lines...great

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

great iamgery......wonderful use of hyperbole.........great great write indeed :)

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Erica Santana 25 September 2012

Pretty good dedication to the one you love

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