Lawrence S. Pertillar

Bronze Star - 5,105 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Who Opened The Door?


When did you notice,
A room you consciously entered...
Was dark and had no windows?

'First of all,
I did not go there to judge.
Or was told that the stairs were there.'

Who opened the door?

'You are attempting to ignore the facts.
I fell.
What are you going to do about that? '

Well...
Let's begin with both of us pretending,
You have common sense.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 01, 2013
Edited: Thursday, May 02, 2013

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