Who Am I? Poem by Queen Taz

Who Am I?



Who am i?
I'm the one who takes slack from no one,
the one who corrects you when you need corrections.

Who am i?
I am the diamond you find in the rough,
The one who is built ford tough.

Who am i?
I am simply me and no one else,
I am not a open book that is easily read and put back on a shelf.

Who am i?
I am god's child and to thee i may not be;
But to my father i am everything he made me to be.

Who am i?
I'M A QUEEN THAT RULES ME & HAS ALL ROYAL RIGHTS TO BE WHATEVER I SET MYSELF OUT TO BE!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hi Kevia, I liked your poem 'who am I' very much. You prove you are a law unto yourself. The two lines which struck me most are: I am god's child and to thee i may not be; But to my father i am everything he made me to be. You indeed are god's child capable of reaching greater heights. Wish you all the best,

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Theresa Moore 10 April 2007

Strong and confident. Powerful poem.

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Ben Gieske 09 April 2007

You are 'Kevia', the one and only, and you will need to write a lot more poems before it is all over.

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