White-Water Rafting Poem by Mia Ocean

White-Water Rafting

Rating: 4.7


The water
is flowing
with rage,
it splashes
and bubbles,
hurtles and
troubles,
anyone
who is
near.
The water
is flowing
downstream,
pulling
pebbles,
pinecones,
and people.
It's roaring
in the ears
of the raftors,
who are hollering
to be heard
over
the white
foaming
water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 01 February 2006

Beautiful imagery and use of words. You have a real gift for poetry

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Charles Chaim Wax 01 February 2006

I read this poem in a dream sublime then sublime now keep up the good work

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