Too Late Poem by Mia Ocean

Too Late

Rating: 4.5


The black lake
is dangerous.
We do not know why.
We do not question.
The village people,
they don't answer questions.
Because they don't talk.
They claim the black lake tells
them to write.
So that's what they do.
They write us stories.
The stories warn us.
But sometimes,
writing is too slow.
And we don't know.
Us, we always know.
But sometimes we can't,
and the unthinkable happens.
We begin to Seperate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mia Bouhabib 11 January 2020

Seperate is spelled wrongly it's supposed to be separate

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Tori Ocean 27 November 2006

sketchy! between this one, 'separated' and 'no one' u sound like some thing out of a creepy movie..........cool!

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Peter A. Crowther 30 April 2006

Sounds ominous. It's 'sepArated'by the way.

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