Where Was He There Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Where Was He There

Rating: 3.1


where was HE there?
he was'nt the judge sitting in mid air
he was'nt my attorney fighting my affair
he was'nt the opponent looking up a winning air
he was'nt the case there
he was'nt the verdict too there..for
the verdict was against me there
i was made one among the lot there..and
it was'nt fair..and
HE was the only one who knew the fair..but
where was HE there
well HE was there
HE was holding my hands there
a shattered me had HE to bear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 24 February 2009

Sam...you toy with words...this is the best part about you...very nice.

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Sandra Martyres 07 May 2009

A very touching piece Samanyan....He was there to console you....to be with you in your dark moments...to hold your hand. Great write

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Indira Renganathan 07 March 2009

'HE was holding my hands there a shattered me had HE to bear'....well..He is omnipresent..knows every being, every occurrence..you being aware of the fact..He will see to your welfare..nice write

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Linda Moore 25 February 2009

Written as if conversing with the inner being questioning, wondering of the Divine presence. I like it.....10

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C. P. Sharma 24 February 2009

neti, neti, You have very well used the Vedic method of knowing the Truth. A great write. CP

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Catrina Heart 24 February 2009

unique theme questioning where the Divine one is.......from all the things we are doing...is he watching? 10++++++++++

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