When Your Time Comes Poem by Avinandan Roy

When Your Time Comes

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It wasn't with knives he beckoned me,
Neither though his eyes any danger I could see,
It was with love he hold me tight,
Showing me; a lovely dreamy sight.

He took me round to a trip unknown,
Driving his carriage and humming a tone,
I closed my eyes and listened to the song,
A melody which I hadn't heard for long.

The carriage creaked; on its way down the lane,
Where little children glanced through the window pane,
The setting sun spreading its rays,
The seconds and minutes adding to days.

And then we arrived to a lawn so green,
Where all my friends and relatives could be seen,
I looked at their eyes; so cold and dark,
As if the dead has made its mark.

And then the fire set ablaze,
Following the tears in an incessant chase,
And slowly I vanished in the smoke that rose,
To an unknown land no one knows..

Monday, May 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 May 2016

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely pennen in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Avi.

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Avinandan Roy 17 May 2016

Thank you for taking your time and reading my poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2016

And then the fire set ablaze, Following the tears in an incessant chase, And slowly I vanished in the smoke that rose, To an unknown land no one knows.. at the end sadness. death, going away to a land unknown...... thank you for this poem dear poet. tony

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