When You Poem by Kruthi Parappa

When You

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When your whole world is turned dark;
When the small light source you had exhausted;
When 'no'is the only word in your dictionary;
When you are all used up;
When all you have left for yourself is disgust;
The only friend you find is 'death'.
The urge to embrace him just gets stronger;
The only friend who can take you to another world;
That only friend who you can trust comes to rescue you someday;
Unstrangles you from all the relationships and becomes your only love.
Hey man, waiting for you to get me!

Saturday, August 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 October 2016

An insightful depiction of life at its deplorable low ebb, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kruthi.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2016

Unstrangles you from all the relationships and becomes your only love. Hey man, waiting for you to get me! Sounds pessimistic...... but there is also truth...... so many want to escape from this world full of untruths and terror and lies............ but we have a call as poets to stay here and try to change it as we can........ pen is powerful......

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2016

I am still waiting too. Well done, Kruthi. Thanks

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