When Love And Lust Grow Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

When Love And Lust Grow

Rating: 5.0


Like a pebble that falls
In calm waters
Love forms in minds ripples
That grow into giant waves
Of a mighty tidal flow.
It's a spark that falls
into the fuming fuel
And inflame into an inferno.
Like a deer in wild fire
Burns to ashes sanity

Sunday, September 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,lust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love and lust grow from a mild stage to a mighty one
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 November 2021

Love forms in minds ripples That grow into giant waves Of a mighty tidal flow.......great expression with fathomless poetic beauty!

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Valsa George 08 September 2020

Blind love leads to irrationality...! If blind love is coupled with, it can leave a man beastly and it is as dangerous as a volcanic eruption! Beautifully said, dear friend!

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Yes, dear poetess. Love and cannot go hand in hand. overpowers love creating a drift in the relation. Either of the pair will have to fall deep in to the ditch of despair. Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 September 2020

A very pragmatic write sir. Appreciated....10/10

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Thank you very much dear Dr.Dillip

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 September 2020

True but thats nature....you know the go forth and mutiply adage...sometimes with dire consequences

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Thank you Deluke Muwanigwa

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 September 2020

It is true. A spark becomes a volcano and destroys everything. A nice poem indeed beautifully crafted.

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Its true dear AKP that the spark when grows into towering inferno it turs harmful..10

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