When I Think Of You Poem by Ciera Ivey

When I Think Of You

Rating: 4.5


As the wind softly blows
I always think of you
Your long brown hair
Smelled like the morning dew

Your gorgeous hazel eyes
Could put me in a daze
You've been dead now
For 7 years and so many days

I think about you more
As time passes by
When I think about you though,
I always start to cry

I try to hold it in
But the tears stream down my face
I try to hide the tears
For I think I'm a disgrace

I'll keep you out of mind
So I don't burst down in tears
I'll try to wear a smile
I've made it through 7 years

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 20 July 2007

The pathos you invoke... Can't imagine anyone reading this and not hurting. Nice work.

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What If? 20 July 2007

i think it's great that you have been able to write about your grief very powerful x x

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