When I Love U Poem by Salmaan Sheriff

When I Love U

Rating: 2.8


*when i love u,
*i feel like a king
*the only man on earth
*a fighter of the classic era
*a voluntary prisoner

*when i love u
*i feel like i belong to u
*just like the river at the delta

*when i love u
*all my thoughts end up
*to ur lips, arms
*to my love for u

*when i love u
*its noon, midnight
*in hell or paradise
*anywhere but together
*when i love u
*i dont know if i am
*a begger or a king
*but our dreams will look alike forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 08 January 2010

Salmaan, Love is love by any given name and it is manifested in life in different forms, nevertheless, it is love, either at first sight or longstanding...it is love and you have time on your side to prove it...Great piece! Well penned, you are in the right track and site PH, keep it up! you got from me a 10+++(I am sorry I have trouble rating I already complained to the site...) Love and Peace...

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