Broken Heart Poem by Salmaan Sheriff

Broken Heart

Rating: 2.8


u took my hert,
buh now its tore apart
dnt cht u kno wah u did,
its harmful, painful, even doe am a kid,
a kid at the age of 14,
nothin more just an ordinary gurl,
in dis wurld,
doin work at skl,
tinkin dat am a fool,
mayb one buh never twice,
i blived in all ur lies,
all the tears tht i cried,
was notin buh it dryed,

*all the tym dat i tryed,
alwayz der on ur side,
fantasizin 2 b ur bride,
dreamin dat i wud ride
on ur body while u lied
sleepin on ur side,
huggin u reli tight,
never ever hav a fite,
b the 1 n onli lite,
tht wud shyn very bright,
in ur eyez n in ur mind,
buh now its all changed
as u c i am in pain,
u were the picture in my chaine,
ur nothin buh the rain,
the saddest ting u never gain,
hurtin me u r insaine,
u duno wah u missin on SHAME! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Whitehouse 08 March 2009

Very nicely done :) I enjoyed the visual wording of the poem ^^ keep writing cuz this is really cool

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Via Sorita 25 February 2009

, , wow, , nice poem.....! its very fascinating, , , , hope you can do more

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Via Sorita 25 February 2009

, , wow, , nice poem.....! its very fascinating, , , , hope you can do more

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