The world around me is so numb and quiet
I feel like a caged bird broken inside
The night is the darkest and there is no hope
My breaths are frozen and going down slow
The demon of emptiness has captured my soul
I pray for the death to free me from this hole
The rainbow of my life has turned pale and black
There is no hues left on which I can count on
Always look positive side of the life. Life is made of many struggles and one should try to win them. Nice write.
Thank you so much for your views and comments....and yes I do agree with you...
Yes....you are right....but sometimes we can't gather enough courage to do it....
This writing sounds like coming from someone suffering from depression. It s like that. I have seen it. When strength, vision and will just go down the drain. A beautiful depiction. I hope it is not true. Well done. Mohabeer Beeharry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We become living dead when hope dies. excellent poem, Nishi 10
Yes you are right...life without hope is meaningless.... thank you for your views