When.......... Poem by Tonya Kincheloe

When..........

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When his arms are around me.
I feel warm and safe.
When his eyes are locked with mine.
I feel like I can fly.
When I whatch him work.
It seems we're the only ones alive.
When I hear his voice.
My heart melts away.
When he moved away.
I cried.

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OMGoodness... when i read this poem... i wanted to cry, this is lovely an i can relate... you have no idea how much i can...loved this one

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Serenity Prayer 10 August 2008

very sad. im very sorry, but everything will be ok.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 March 2008

Wonderfully written poem of loss. Well done!

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