What Will Happen To Me (11/7/08) Poem by Kayleigh ....

What Will Happen To Me (11/7/08)

Rating: 4.8


Is it wrong or is it right
Do I have the right to fight
The feelings deep inside of me
Or is this how I'm supposed to be

Will I crash or will I burn
Is happiness something I can earn
Will it always be this bad
Or is this just some kind of fad

Can I be saved before
My heart crumbles to the floor
Or must I suffer even more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lee Crowell 11 November 2008

the last stanza shows a level of maturity unusual for your age keep on writing, your talent will keep us reading

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Jennifer Sollmann 07 November 2008

this poem is fantastic. i love it. && it won't always be bad, there must be sadness and pain for joy and happiness to exist: ]

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