What Sorrow Has Befallen Me Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE
What Sorrow Has Befallen Me
What sorrow has befallen me
No sun to light my day,
These clouds yield only misery
While joy has fled away,
Across the lands where no one goes
And all do fear to tread,
Where only fear and silence grows
And dreams are lying dead.
Now waves of sadness and despair
Do swamp my aching heart,
For no one now does seem to care
My life's been torn apart,
Regrets I shall take to my grave
My tears forever flow,
For all my hopes I could not save
And on the winds did blow.
And yet no malice do I keep
Nor hate towards my love,
I'll dream of her within my sleep
While stars do shine above,
And hope that soon the dawn shall break
Then shine just like before,
For now I know each morn I wake
I'll miss her even more.
a very sad poem but written masterfully.... you have great sense of rhyme and rhythms....very well done sir.
What remarkable melancholy, Andrew...... From heart was going your words flow.... as silvery tears...10x10... Sincerely, Tsira
Very poignant and powerful love. Heart wrenching. Some thing I expressed in HER SMILE. Beautiful indeed.
What a moving piece of writing Andrew, so sad and poignant. But a marvellous poem with great flow and with sweet words. Great feeling in this one too. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
What a masterpeace you have created here with each and every stanza, shows so many diferent heartaches that you can feel the pain, and wish the reader to want to reach out and comfort you..... Very tender write, and as always, another excellent write..... Bonnie
Such a wistful pensive piece written straight from the heart. The saddest part for me was 'for no one now does seem to care'. You have captured the imagery with such creativity Andrew, as it will linger with me during my day......Karin Anderson
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I would like to translate this poem
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To love someone and not be loved in return is tragic, a very sad tale Andy, my heart is broken reading it, you are a master at your craft my friend, 10+++ Lynda xx