What I Saw In The Fire. Poem by Stephanie Dower

What I Saw In The Fire.

Rating: 4.0


I sat alone in a darkened room.
The fireplace warmed me to the core.
I gazed with tired eyes into the fire,
And was shocked at what I saw.

The flames first licked hungrily
At the large oaken logs.
Now shimmering hunters,
Following a pack of dogs.
Caught in an eternal chase,
They bounded across the wood.
Their prey, a fleeing deer,
Running as fast as it could.

Then the fires died down.
And shot back up to form,
A set of angry clouds,
Rolling in a storm.
A blink and the scene changed
Back into a calm glade.
A merry fawn with flute
Dancing as it played.

I shook my head and rubbed my eyes.
I looked back in the flame.
No beasts, no storm, no music.
Only fire and embers remain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Kirkland 14 October 2008

Almost a psychodelic dream - Wonderful!

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Wojja Fink 14 October 2008

Wonderful to read wow........!

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Josh Woods 13 October 2008

i like this poem as i was reading it i had a visaul image in my head nice piece : D

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Tom Balch 13 October 2008

nice piece, imagination drifting with the flames, keep writing your good.10 from Tom

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