I have committed many a sin,
big, small and wee.
and before committing every sin,
i tremble and think and think?
how can i commit one more sin?
then again i think,
what difference will make this one sin?
now when i look at myself,
i find myself top to toe,
dipped in the dark waters of sin.
it makes me scared to die,
and more afraid of my lord.
i just dont know how to face my creator.
how can i present myself-full of sinister?
my fearful eyes shed a tear,
i look at the sky, with heart full of fear,
the beautiful sky and the floating clouds,
gives birth to new wishes and desires.
and again i am ready to commit another sin.
thinking what difference will make this one sin?
You need to see, Gods Love as motivatIon, Jesus died for all your sin, from cradle to grave, we all fall short, my friend..do not be discouraged, just dont sin with intention, that is a no. well written from the heart
good depiction, yes, human beings are always inclined to do what is forbidden.dont worry it is our basic nature, Allah knows it better than us
This is amazing, far better than anything I've ever made, although it's just my opinion.... But, this poem almost brought a tear to my eye, sorry if it sounds odd but, the feelings explained in this poem and the reason for them are things I often think of myself.
self-interrogation may help bring in some answers...nice proceed...luv Hribhu
Surely one more sin doesn't make any difference if it is atone for. So always ready to seek forgiveness when you commit any sin. Lovely write. A perfect 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well penned and poignant write! 10+++Keep it up! Love and Peace for always!