The Murder Of Humanity Poem by Arfa Iris

The Murder Of Humanity

Rating: 4.6


Once there lived two friends,
human and humanity.
human was loving and caring,
while humanity spread peace and brotherhood.
under their friendship tree,
everyone was happy and merry.
in the same world lived Hate and Greed, full of sinister.
very different from all the other.
who were always jealous of human and humanity,
and they tried hard to part the friends
and throw them away in different ends.
the did succeed,
in the heart of human they planted hate-seed.
soon the seed started to rear,
and human was left with no love and care.
it turned furious towards humanity.
all their friendship woes turned into enmity.
hate and greed infected human one after the other.
and made human to commit the murder.
end of peace was marked with the murder of humanity,
in some lost corner is the grave of humanity,
now the world knows only hate, greed and enmity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 20 June 2011

But is it not murder was part of humanity for thousands years past. It was but a need control that made murder wrong. Civilized is the name of the control, for how many would really think twice about killing someone if the laws of those ties didn't exist. Caveman, Tribes killed foreign and wide. This was but a precursor to the things we now call hate and greed. If only out necessity, would you, could you, should you? Nobody ever really knows till they face it as ghost of evil thoughts and demands. Good poem, hope you like my thoughts on the subject. This is definitely going in my favorites.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 June 2011

The universe is still alive by dint of humanity. Come what way, howsoever adverse the circumtances may be, humanity cannot be murdered. If it is ignored at one place, it is embraced at another. If only a single 'MOMIN', I mean the person who is entirely human with his faith, is alive on earth, God will never send doom. I think your poem is an outcome of your fair sentiments towards humanity. By the way, I loved the piece though I have some reservations. But your love towards humanity will definitely receive 10 marks. Take care Akmal

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Hribhu Dey 21 June 2011

As the story developes thought developes...simple yet deep write...loved it Dear! plz read some of my new poems.thanks

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i agree with Mohd. Akmal Nazir, in full. Humans are Gods creation, humanity is in His Hand. We are who we are......But be sure of this.....God is Just.......All will be seen......On that Great Day. no one will get away but your respect for your fellow, has shone though the poem

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Alaude Solus 23 June 2011

Pace. Truly, humanity is murdered, but hope is not lost. AWESOME poem, kind madam: D

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Mohit Sharma 22 June 2011

well composed one...keep it up! !

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Rekha Mandagere 22 June 2011

Friend you have made use of nice metaphor and narration technique is curious and enchanting. Nice poem.

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Adrian Shorey 21 June 2011

Although I do not perceive things as well as most who read this, mostly due to my aging, in my opinion I say the poem is very well written. If I were to choose my favorite part, I wouldn't know which to choose because I liked the entire thing.

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Arfa Iris

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hyderabad, A.P, India.
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