What Am I? Poem by Umul Baneen Brohi

You write amazing! ! ! You maintained a wonderful rhythm...And yes Money plagues us like a devil! ! Keep on writing such poems we are waiting!

Keep writing more.When you grow up, you wil become a nice poetess.

You make me God, I will plague you like a devil....Wonderful lines! ! !

Handled the money concept wisely, liked the rhyming skill too. Keep on writing.

very nice poem sumthing's interesting

justice done with money...that's sure cause the poem has absolutely taken over me...... yaar it's fantastic issi tarha se likha karo

good really nice like it *-*

Powerful! Money is not everything, they say but it helps! This is a very strong write and it is clearly an outburst of the heart and mind! Who are you? Time Will Tell, most likely a successful business man one day! Perhaps, if you take some time out from from your money thinking machine and spend it in other human values like poetry, dancing or playing in the open field in a sunny day, then you will be completed rewarded by your destiny! 10+++ Excellent write! Thank you for sharing and God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

money is the second god as people made but he instigates to do unworthy things, very good writing.....please read my poems.