I am every men's dream,
I will make you gleam,
The more you get me,
The more you want,
I am charismatic,
With me you feel fantastic,
I am the root of all evil,
You love me like an idol,
With me you are not happy,
Yet I am a miserable comfort,
I am appealed,
But not pursued,
You make me God,
I will plague you like a devil,
I am praised as a fact,
Every second of every day
What Am I?
I am money.
Keep writing more.When you grow up, you wil become a nice poetess.
You make me God, I will plague you like a devil....Wonderful lines! ! !
Handled the money concept wisely, liked the rhyming skill too. Keep on writing.
justice done with money...that's sure cause the poem has absolutely taken over me...... yaar it's fantastic issi tarha se likha karo
Powerful! Money is not everything, they say but it helps! This is a very strong write and it is clearly an outburst of the heart and mind! Who are you? Time Will Tell, most likely a successful business man one day! Perhaps, if you take some time out from from your money thinking machine and spend it in other human values like poetry, dancing or playing in the open field in a sunny day, then you will be completed rewarded by your destiny! 10+++ Excellent write! Thank you for sharing and God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
money is the second god as people made but he instigates to do unworthy things, very good writing.....please read my poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You write amazing! ! ! You maintained a wonderful rhythm...And yes Money plagues us like a devil! ! Keep on writing such poems we are waiting!