What Ails Human Race Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

What Ails Human Race

Rating: 4.6


These tangled yarns
Of human relations
A neat ball of wool
Changes into fuzzy creation

Knotted and trapped
Every strand every thread
How did we make it
This unyielding mess

We were all born
To create a pretty
Tapestry of life
Patterns and motifs
With colours so bright

Knitted with love
Mittens for hands
Not to be matted
Into useless
wool strands

Egos and greeds
And jealousies that breed
Trampled emotions
Xenophobic creeds

We end up suffering
Getting entangled, enraged
It's our own doing
Time to end all this craze

Saturday, September 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalit Kaira 25 April 2015

Egos and greeds And jealousies that breed Trampled emotions Xenophobic creeds praiseworthy....... and thought provoking

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 08 September 2014

Thanks Mr Pulingat for your graciousness. Thanks Achill Lad....but. I am just an amateurs beginner who is still learning....thanks for encouraging words

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Achill Lad 07 September 2014

Creative, thoughtful. Extremely well written. Could learn so much from poets like you.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 06 September 2014

A beautiful poem about human relations.

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