Randhir kaur

Gold Star - 6,327 Points (9/2/1997 / Assam, jorhat)

What A Day? ? ? - Poem by Randhir kaur

I was elated and the whole throng,
Girls were clamourning a cheers song.
We frabjously watching the cricket match,
One after one enjoyed the defenders catch..
My team won the target,
Hollering high like never willing to forget.
People saw our lively craze,
Thought we would never win the first race..
Second was the round and fielding was ours,
But I went fret, lost my glasses, finding for hours.
Everything seemed unseen for me.
Everyone thinking of how will I play and see..
A girl lended her specs,
Took it n gave returns on cheeks with pecks.
Playing but thinking it was very expensive.
And my mother will slay me, there I went
pensive..
Exhausted and remained silent after lossing,
Sat down glumly with wet eyes in a way
displeasing.
Swagata yelled, ur opticals are here,
There I won the match when my buddies chase
after me for a cheer..

Topic(s) of this poem: sports

Form: Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It is my experience of Sports day..freting at the same time an enjoyable day..I will never forget that day.. Swagata just a big LOL..

Comments about What A Day? ? ? by Randhir kaur

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/14/2016 1:33:00 AM)


    Clamourning a cheer song! ! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur (7/10/2016 7:19:00 AM)


    Thank you Kaul Sir. Peace. (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (7/10/2016 3:49:00 AM)


    A vibrant with a nostalgic touch...lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Randhir Kaur (6/17/2016 6:11:00 AM)


    Many many thanks Rajnish Manga, Sk Nurul Huda, Unnikrishnan ES for your warm felicitation. Peace to hear such words. Keep reading. Stay connected. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (6/15/2016 12:48:00 AM)


    Amazing poem with a captivating narrative that brings about the joy and emotion of the Sports Day at college. Thanks for sharing the poem and Congrats for its being selected as 'Poem of the Day'. (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (6/14/2016 10:32:00 PM)


    great.....first of all congratulation for being member poet...

    don't think....you will win the final match of your life......
    a real poet you are...
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  • (6/14/2016 9:51:00 PM)


    Randhir,

    You carried me back to my good old school/college days. Thank you. And many congrats on being selected as the poet of the day.
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  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 12:34:00 PM)


    Thank you Savita.. I am glad you liked it..Stay updated. (Report) Reply

  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 12:24:00 PM)


    Thanks Ratnakar for your warm wishes..It means a lot dear...Keep reading. (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2016 11:14:00 AM)


    Spontaneous flow of youthful anxiety and emotions has made this poem inspirational and great. Heartiest Congrats for composing it as also on it's selection as member poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2016 10:34:00 AM)


    Great poem. Loved the enthusiasm and vibrancy. (Report) Reply

  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 7:08:00 AM)


    Hahaaaahaa...Well taken Tom. Thanks for reading. (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2016 6:58:00 AM)


    Lost and found! Reminds me so much of School Events.
    Very well written and funny too!
    Tom Billsborough
    (Report) Reply

  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 6:57:00 AM)


    Packet full of thank you's Jayatissa. Peace. Stay connected. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (6/14/2016 6:45:00 AM)


    College matches are the greatest memorable events in that life. Wonderful write. Congrats on your achievement. X (Report) Reply

  • Randhir Kaur (6/14/2016 6:41:00 AM)


    Thank you Evensong, Soul Watcher, Kelly Kurt, Mohammed Asim Nehal, Kim Barney and Kishore Kumar Das for your lovely kind words. I am just overwhelmed and cannot explain my happiness. This is possible all because of your love and support, for your respect and appreciation. I love writing, I am not a poet but you all made me so.
    Ever many thanks to each and everyone. Loads of love and hugs. Stay tuned.
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  • Soul Watcher (6/14/2016 4:10:00 AM)


    Well done Randhir, , congratulations to be poet of the day (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (6/14/2016 3:53:00 AM)


    A memory that I hope lasts a lifetime. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (6/14/2016 2:19:00 AM)


    Memories are hard to erase, Wonderful poem, Randhirji...Loved it.10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2016 1:36:00 AM)


    Your enthusiasm for the sport is certainly showing. Congratulations for having this selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 24, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 11, 2016


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